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with you I walk,
bellow the trees.
wondering aimlessly,
along shallow seas.
you tell me you 'have to',
I say 'you don't'.
you tell me to 'let go',
and I say 'I won't'.
'Come here! Go there!'
is what you said.
and now you say Stay,
asthough I am your pet.
in the end you left anyway
leaving me with,'I had no choice.'
tell me, My Darling ::::
since when did You have no voice?
bellow the trees.
wondering aimlessly,
along shallow seas.
you tell me you 'have to',
I say 'you don't'.
you tell me to 'let go',
and I say 'I won't'.
'Come here! Go there!'
is what you said.
and now you say Stay,
asthough I am your pet.
in the end you left anyway
leaving me with,'I had no choice.'
tell me, My Darling ::::
since when did You have no voice?
I was feeling very independent when I wrote this:aswell as the male race was not in my good books
but all is now well and they have been forgiven^^lol. Tell me ya Thoughts!~
but all is now well and they have been forgiven^^lol. Tell me ya Thoughts!~ © 2008 - 2024 lost-sin
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someone pushing YOU around....somehow I just can't imagine that...but then again it would explain a lot...
overall...I love it!!!...especially that whole anti-climax sorta thing you did in the last line...very contradictory though...as if there is a part of the story you're not telling...or is this poem about more than one person...
well anyway thats my take on it...correct me if i'm off a little...AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
overall...I love it!!!...especially that whole anti-climax sorta thing you did in the last line...very contradictory though...as if there is a part of the story you're not telling...or is this poem about more than one person...
well anyway thats my take on it...correct me if i'm off a little...AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!